An Excerpt

Apr 18, 2013 quarter to three pm

An excerpt from the novel I'm not writing:

Victoria wasn't a beautiful woman, but she was far from an ugly one.  What she was, was a scary woman. When Victoria punched you, you stayed punched.  It's a lesson we all learned at some point.  It was a lesson Thomas was about to learn.  We pretended to be busy while he learned it.

Other people's comments:

Posted by Leonard on Apr 18, 2013 twenty five past three pm

That's not the Victoria you are looking for.

Posted by Andrea on Apr 18, 2013 five past five pm

About the learn?

Posted by Rob Carlson on Apr 18, 2013 five past five pm

This is my favorite excerpt so far. Shame you're not writing this thing.


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